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your love
                       is the kind
   that
                     looks good on paper
dont
             go flat on me
        becoming                     one dimensional
          stepping
a
      single
           rung
        from         disbelief     to                   feeling
          emotions
     are not
                      escalators
                     reach the top
      on        your          own
     please
dont
               turn me cold
                                      and                 practical
    another heartless character
              who          breaks             the leading man
with
                          the infamous line:
"love just isnt enough"
                                                                                                 for
                 love                     is more
                       than a word
                                                             it is an action
                                                         a gesture
                                               a feeling
so
                                           be there for me
     when                                                     you say you will
                                  be enough
            for me to stay
                          and                                          your love
will
      always
                   be      enough
©2006-2009 ~x-LeiNeR-x
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~ElcyionCoire:iconElcyionCoire: Feb 23, 2006, 11:32:20 AM
::hug:: i'm sorry about this morning : x i'll do better next time.

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you've been tampon tagged , ha ha!
~timerise:icontimerise: Feb 23, 2006, 7:19:46 PM
I like this words and I hate tha spacing cause it makes me have to work harder to read it and I am lazy. it was worth the effort tho.

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my other account on DA is *jadisofeternity
~sopranosfan:iconsopranosfan: Feb 24, 2006, 8:07:19 AM
i totally got the meaning of that. hehe, i like the style that you put it in. things like that always interest me ^.^ awesome piece

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My life has taken me beyond the planets and the stars
And you're the only one that could take me this far
I'll be forever searching for your love.

I walked away but I was wrong,
You're the one that keeps me strong,
You're the fire that keeps me war
~eveline26:iconeveline26: Feb 25, 2006, 8:05:00 AM
interesting use of spacing to get across the message. very nice way to grab the reader's attention and force them to pay attention to the words themselves.

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"This race and this country and this life produced me. I shall express myself as I am."
+James Joyce+
~Paradise-founD:iconParadise-founD: Feb 28, 2006, 8:31:33 PM
i really like this one =]

+fav!

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"I was frantically looking for something
it's okay to stumble, so go forward
I know it's foolish, I just run on without regret
the only one I can trust is myself, I didn't need friends
the fangs I bared at anything and everything..."
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